After I read Annie Hsieh’s paragraph, I agree her very much. When I was a senior high school student, I started living outside alone. Since that time, I have been lived outside alone five years. Living outside alone is also a good opportunity for me, because I can learn a lot of experience. Just like Annie, I also become more independent and responsible than before living with my family. Living outside alone means that no one can set a lot of rules that I should to follow every day. I become very free to do anything and spend money. Under this situation, I must become more responsible for myself. I should not make my parents worry about me. Therefore, before I do anything, I will think twice and avoid bad consequences happen. Besides, living outside alone makes me learn to cherish the relationship to my family. Because I am the club leader, I am very busy in school. I have no enough time to go home. Therefore, when I go home, I cherish every moment to accompany my family. My family and I will go to eat dinner, watch a good movie and chat about everything before we go to bad. The relationship between my family and I is become better and better. Although living outside alone makes me feel lonely in some moment, it is really a good opportunity for me to improve myself. Besides, I think that Annie can add some examples about how she solves problems by herself. The paragraph will become more convincing than before.
Emily(259)
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