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    In this the last semester, I really learn a lot stills so far. To be honest, writing a composition is an easy thing while writing an excellent composition is not easy. During high school, I was honored to be a little team leader who needed to mark corrections on my classmates’ notebooks. When I am in college, I realize that all I just learned before are trivial things.

    Within four months, I learn some difficult writing skills to improve my compositions. For example, I used to write a short paragraph and simple words before. But now we have to learn how to write longer paragraph which include hook, thesis statement and topic sentence. When our teacher teaching us step by step, we can write down at least more than five paragraphs as our essay. Although our composition still cannot compare to those professional writing, we get better and better now.

    I dare say this way due to work which we upload on our website. From the title we talk about, I can see how the text interesting is. Generally speaking, the first sentence is the hook which catch readers eye. It is a good way to attract readers’ attention if we write down a good hook. Next, in the last sentence of the first paragraph will be the thesis statement which is a short explanation of author’s ideas. Then, the middle part will be the body. Next part will be the conclusion. However, it is hard to train our writing skills at the first time. As the old proverb saying“A high building, a low foundation.” When we kept writing and practicing, our teacher can point out lots of faults that we make. In view of this, I see many students’ article getting better and better.

(2117/2000) Ava Ju