A Review on My Favorite Season

    

    After reading Ken Chang’s composition-My Favorite Season, I also think what season is my favorite. I think, my favorite season is autumn. Autumn is very comfortable for me, and I like the breeze in autumn. In Ken’s composition, he wrote an introduction for this composition. I thing this is a pretty good way for beginning; it will let you want to read the following article.

    In the second paragraph, the writer wrote a reason about why he love winner. He said he can enjoy the chafing dish and the hot spirit with his family. The writer ate the chafing dish with his friend at school in winner, and this experience is very memorable for him so he love winner. I thing the writer gave this paragraph a complete support sentence and let the reader can realize his mood more easily.

    In the third paragraph, the writer wrote the other reasons about why the he likes winter. There are many particular days in winter. He said we can eat rice ball in winter solstice and celebrate Chinese New Year with our family. I think the writer can write more support sentences in this paragraph. For example, he can write the reason about why he love eat rice ball in the winter solstice.

    In the final paragraph, the writer makes a conclusion. He thinks people cannot decide resolutely which one is the best because there are many advantages and characteristics of each season. I agree his viewpoint, others may love other seasons. I think the seasons can make our earth more beautiful and I also very enjoy the life with the seasons changing. 

Heidi (276words)