Report-Why Students Should Eat Breakfast Every Day

I choose this composition because the topic is interesting. The author used a question to be the topic, and I interesting in author’s opinion. In the first paragraph, I think the thesis statement is not complete. He can list the three reasons that he was going to say.

In his first supporting paragraph, the topic sentence is “The first reason why you should eat breakfast before going to school is for your health.” He listed some examples to show the important of eating breakfast before going to school. If we don’t eat the breakfast, we will be looking for a disease. Maybe he can show more examples to support this paragraph.

In the second supporting paragraph, the topic sentence is “Another reason for eating breakfast is because you need food for to do well in your classes.” This paragraph is talking about the effects of learning. The author argued that a lot of people think that they should not eat because they are going to feel tired, but that is not true. I propose showing some studies in this paragraph is better.

In the third supporting paragraph, the topic sentence is “The last reason to have breakfast every day is because you can avoid diseases if you eat some breakfast in the morning.” This paragraph is similar with the first supporting paragraph. In my opinions, the author can talk about the benefits of eating breakfast. It can shows the contrast between the first and the third supporting paragraph.

In the last paragraph, I like the last sentence “eating breakfast is the better way to start your day.” Apparently the author considers that eating breakfast is important. He used a good end to respond to his whole essay. I really identified with his opinions. Eating breakfast is the happiest thing in my life.

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