My Opinion about "Eva Lai 's The Reasons for Being Late"

I agreed with Eva’s idea. Many students late for class because they overslept, missed the bus, and met traffic jams. These three reasons are very common. Nowadays,more and more people stay up late; maybe it was because they were studying,chatting on the internet or watching TV, etc. Actually, I really want to stay up late as many people did so that I can do a lot of things at that time but it’s not possible for me to stay up late. I always want to sleep when the time was nearly 22:00. However, after read Eva‘s writing,I didn’t want to do this anymore as it would curse a lot of problems. And, I hate to be late for any classes,so it’s better for me to sleep at regular time.
Eva’s essay is very good. The ideas are right and two of the reasons are connected. I like the sentences that she wrote because the sentences are fluent and clear. And the conjunction was used very well. This is a good essay because people can learn from it. How the problems may occur and how to avoid and decrees it. The thesis statement very clear; we can know what she wants to tell us. And I really like her first sentence; she used a question at the beginning of the essay.
Tanya(224)