Afterthought of"Should Cigarette Smoking Be Forbidden?"(148)

From:  http://sites.pccu.edu.tw/i-say-you-say/144444/shouldcigarettesmokingbeforbidden

I am attracted by the title: "Should Cigarette Smoking Be Forbidden?" because I really hate the smell of cigarette smoking. Unfortunately, both of my parents are addicted to it. The three obvious reasons in the introduction paragraph are so clear that the readers can know what she wants to say. The first supporting paragraph is talking about the damages to the smoker’s body, and she uses some proper nouns about diseases of smoking. And her second reason is thoughtful that she mentions about the non-smokers. In the third paragraph, the writer is careful enough to give many details and statistics. Her last paragraph responds to the title that smoking should be forbidden. I used to be angry at my parents of their habits, but they still had so many excuses to make me silent. I think I will tell them about this essay and try to persuade them.